Keep the image lifted, not instructional.
Linenvio works best when the subject is a kite or kite-like fabric form seen as shape: a taut line, a tail curl, a color block in the sky, or a shadow below.
Let the air do the mood work.
Write around lightness, pull, spacing, color, and the pause between ground and sky. Avoid explaining how to fly, choose, fix, or handle anything.